
Naamah's Curse - Jacqueline Carey
This is the first Kushiel’s Legacy book I have three-starred. It was hard not to tack on an extra star for loyalty’s/consistency’s sake, because I truly loved the first seven books. What I loved about Naamah’s Kiss was its ability to introduce a completely new cast of characters while maintaining the essence of the Kushiel saga. Naamah’s Curse, however, felt like a pale imitation of Phèdre’s trilogy.
The parallels are many: the diamond that exerts considerable control over Moirin (much like the diamond Melisande had Phèdre wear), Jehanne’s lingering power over Moirin and left-behind child (Melisande/Imriel, anyone?), etc.
But the primary problem for me in this book was characterization. In the original trilogy, we never needed to be told that Phèdre was awesome. She exemplified awesomeness. She lived it and breathed it, and no one had to say it aloud to make it known. In Naamah’s Curse, however, we are constantly beaten over the head with how awesome Moirin is. We are told, not shown, that she is the most amazing woman who ever lived by multiple characters. Yes, she’s capable of some impressive magic tricks and underwent a difficult journey to find Bao, but she is also prone to self-indulgent wallowing the likes of which would have appalled Phèdre.
Here are examples of some more “Mary Sue”-esque passages. Warning: There are many.
“Bao sighed, ‘Moirin, you possess a gift the likes of which no one outside your strange bear-folk has ever seen. You possess a strange beauty the likes of which no one has ever seen. You are descended from three different royal lineages’” (87).
[commence whining-cum-boasting] “The quest I had undertaken in Ch’in to free the princess and the dragon should have been enough for anyone’s lifetime. But oh, no! Not for Moirin. The great Khan had betrayed me, the gods had scooped me up and tossed me back onto the gaming table, sending me to Vralia, where the Patriarch of Riva dreamed of destiny, dreamed of a Yeshuite empire built on bloodshed and loathing. I had put an end to his dream. I had armed my sweet boy Aleksei with the courage of his convictions that he might continue the fight against his uncle’s vile legacy, raising a voice in favor of love, compassion, and understanding, altering the course of his world. And yet it wasn’t enough. No, now I must be shaken and rattled and tossed once more, hurtled back into the fray, pitted against this legendary Falconer and his bedamned Spider Queen with her unknown charms that held grown men in thrall. And it was not enough that I find the missing half of my soul, too. A boy-monk with kind, gentle, ancient eyes was depending on me to rescue the reincarnation of one of the Enlightened Ones. And that, he had informed me, was only the beginning of my journey. I had further oceans to cross. It was a considerable weight to carry, a considerable weight to place on the shoulder of a young woman who had grown up in a cave in the Alban wilderness. And I felt very alone beneath my burden” (364). [/end whining-cum-boasting]
“‘And as sick as you were, you still looked like you’d stepped out of an ancient tale from when gods and goddesses roamed the earth’” (468).
“‘You are wise for one so young, Moirin’” (491).
“‘You would be desirable beyond bearing … You already incite powerful desire. Were you to don Kamadeva’s diamond, I think no one would be able to resist you, for the diamond would reflect your own considerable passions back at them. Men would walk through fire for the chance to touch your skin–and women, too. Men would gladly fight to the death for your favor without being asked. I daresay you couldn’t stop them from doing it’” (520).
“…I didn’t know how to be an ordinary, mortal lover anymore” (528).
There are others, but these were some of the more striking examples. Bottom line: It was easy to get behind Phèdre. This was a young woman born to be an outlet for mankind’s basest instincts, and she sometimes hated what she was. Moirin, on the other hand, comes off as a rather boy-/girl-crazy schoolgirl at times, complete with giggling. Perhaps the concept of Kushiel’s dart was developed better than that of Naamah’s blessing. I understood why Phèdre ended up in dalliances with various characters. But Moirin’s “gift” is undiscriminating–all anyone need do is cast her an intense gaze, and she’s putty in their hands.
What saved this book for me is Bao. As I said to another friend who just read this, Bao is Bao. In my eyes, he has no parallel in the other trilogies. He’s more impish than Joscelin, more impudent than Imriel. He is, at times, genuinely funny. He may just be the strongest element of the entire Naamah trilogy.
So, overall, three stars. I’m not sure where Naamah’s Blessing will take us, which is strange. When I finished the second books of both other trilogies, I had a clearer sense of what was to come in the third books. Naamah’s Curse, however, ends with a wedding and the vague hint that Bao and Moirin will return to Terre d’Ange, likely to meet the late Jehanne’s daughter. Where the conflict will lie is anyone’s guess.